Welcome To My World

Marissa Perszyk

January 24, 2011

Comm 1212

Welcome To My World

                                I.            Intro

a.        Describes the stage

b.      Introduces the topic of ballet and dance  

                             II.            Body

a.       Give background to when I started dance

                                                                                      i.      Give dates, names of studios, locations, etc.

b.      Three character traits

                                                                                      i.      Responsibility

1.      Being on time to class   

                                                                                    ii.      Respect

1.      Listening to instructing from instructor

                                                                                  iii.      (Self) Discipline

1.      Learning that my actions have consequences

                           III.            Conclusion

a.       Dance has not only been fun and something that I enjoy, but it has also taught me a lot about character and I will be able to carry these character traits with me all throughout my life. 

  

---Welcome to My World Speech- post personal evaluation/questions

2. What could you do to improve next time you speak?

                I feel like did an okay job on my first speech of the year. To improve my next speech I make sure to put more effort into practicing my speech so that I have the main points down solid before I present my speech to the class. I would also make sure to give myself some more time to write my speech so that I will be able to practice my speech.

5. What surprised you about the presentation?

                The main thing that surprised me about the presentation is that I went over the time limit. I have no idea how I did that. So now I know for my future speeches to make sure that I stick to my notes and not stray too far away from, or else I may end up speaking to long again.